Keeping It Active

I’m working with chapter five now. My active verbs out number my passive verbs. Dialog trumps prose. So far, so good.

Re-reading two post apocalyptic classics:

The Stand, S. King

Farnham’s Freehold, R. Heinlein

yikes!

But, I’m also reading Water for Elephants and enjoying it.

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